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Karen Joan Topping

You tease out a lot of the “message stuff” to great effect, careful to not belittle the artlessness and tempering your highlighting of Lowe’s work that plays off of political, class, intellectual criticisms, etc.. Your very visual description of the work “Growing Up Isn’t Easy” effectively eviscerates this kind of rhetoric.

You could lop off the first and last paragraph tho', I think. They are both fun and fascinating, but I am much more intrigued with your dissection of humor and pessimism throughout your descriptions of Lowe’s work then I am with your attempts at practicing them in this instance. However, your descriptive, disdainful humor within the body of your descriptions of Lowe’s work is fabulous, establishing the quantifiable pathos of her sardonic presentation – surpassing irony by actually having an opinion.

Nathan Pankratz

Hi Sally,
You have a nice way of setting up a joke, immediately acknowledging the cheesiness of it, and ending on a serious, as well as self-reflective note. You are fun to read, and have a clever way of name-dropping that doesn't come off as pretentious in the least. At points, (I am thinking about the end of your fourth into the fifth paragraph "There are a lot of people...") your tone seems to get away from you, offering up an opinion, that maybe you seem to believe is everyone’s. I much prefer how you let me find the joke, and even have an un-biased laugh at the work itself, as you present it in your second to last paragraph, (“Decent funny art…”). Your last paragraph is both witty and insightful; it provides the social context that gives the reader clarity as to how he/she can view the work of Jean Lowe.

Nathan Pankratz

Hi Sally,
You have a nice way of setting up a joke, immediately acknowledging the cheesiness of it, and ending on a serious, as well as self-reflective note. You are fun to read, and have a clever way of name-dropping that doesn't come off as pretentious in the least. At points, (I am thinking about the end of your fourth into the fifth paragraph "There are a lot of people...") your tone seems to get away from you, offering up an opinion, that maybe you seem to believe is everyone’s. I much prefer how you let me find the joke, and even have an un-biased laugh at the work itself, as you present it in your second to last paragraph, (“Decent funny art…”). Your last paragraph is both witty and insightful; it provides the social context that gives the reader clarity as to how he/she can view the work of Jean Lowe.

Michael

Sally,
I loved reading your review! You have a way of presenting something that is clever and interesting. I found myself wanting to read faster to keep up with your comments about the show. You show a different what of introducing the show and I commend you on this. I would try to focus more on your thoughts about the show and the artist. I think your humor is great and your description and example are fabulous.

Tammi Razzano

Hi Sally,

I love your sense of humor and reaction to Lowe’s sense of humor through out the review. You keep it alive and make the reader want more with your clever remarks. You commented on each book just enough to tell the reader what you thought but did not beat a dead horse by explaining them in great detail. In other words, you gave the reader enough credit to figure out the connections on their own.

I don’t know how many books there were at the show but you did cover quite a bit, 17 I think. I can see why you wanted to include so many, they’re good! Yet, it may have been wise to cover fewer of them so your prediction (“Okay, okay, you may be sighing—we get the joke.”) wouldn’t come true. If you gave fewer examples and focused on vivid descriptions it would allow the reader time to fully grasp their metal image of the covers before moving onto the next title. (Especially since the photo you included wasn’t of those you mentioned.) However, I do like that you point out that some don’t even need a visual description and gave great examples for it.

There was one sentence that I was hung up on; maybe it was too much of a run on or just too wordy. “And although it's amusing enough to have a chuckle at the expense of the squeaky-clean family values people, with all their purpose-driven rhetoric, Growing Up Isn't Easy, Lord when your dad is sitting next to your two-year-old self getting hammered on Michelob Light, as he is in yet another one of Lowe's books, and hundreds of thousands of living rooms across the country at this very moment.” I needed to read this a few times and I’m still a bit confused. Could this be broken down in a couple of sentences for clarity?

Over all I really enjoyed your review and feel that you wrapped things up quite pleasantly by clearly making your opinion heard. “...we have to admit that this show is funny because it's convincing.” Not only did you explain why but by using “we” you were able to nudge the reader to agree with your thoughts.

Jason Gura

Sally Down the Alley,
Both pop culture reference and personal signifier. And never, ever for sale.

I once asked the question- what happens when you confuse awful social commentary with satire? The answer was Saturday Night Live.

More than one off gags, your article succeeded in describing a cultural dilemma that has gone back (for myself) as far as Mad magazine or even more specifically a brand of trading cards created my Maus' Art Spiegelman called Wacky Packies.
You are what you read. In this culture you are what purchase. Jean Lowe has created a great forum in this show for viewing and contemplating both previous statements. Your descriptions were clear and you have a way of enjoying the irony and humor without having it overrun the critique: considering the show you reviewed, thats a tough act to pull off. Your years as a reviewer as well as your graduate school education in writing are readily apparent. Growing Up Isn't Easy Lord is not only the faux title for an imaginary book but a cultural observation. I understood what you wrote right off the bat, although I think for some readers the italics might not be taken into account. A minor criticism. Your personality and opinions come through and validate the argument. I'm sorry I didn't see the show. The cause for cultural literacy moves on!

Thanks.
Jason

Alex

Sally,
Your writing well conveys your excitement about Jean Lowe’s work. You gave many humorous examples of book cover imagery and text. I think you could have chosen fewer examples and really have analyzed them in more depth. You begin your article with uncertainty, and this somewhat shadows the rest of your writing. I think you should really know who the “Someone” is. I really enjoyed the idea of art consumption being a social qualifier and would have liked further investigation of this concept. I was surprised by the down turn of your final paragraph. All of the other paragraphs are humorous and light except for the last, which makes me not want to believe your ultimate impression of the show, was a sad one. Your writing style is quick witted and punchy. Your social and political views are subtly addressed.

Alex

Sally,
Your writing well conveys your excitement about Jean Lowe’s work. You gave many humorous examples of book cover imagery and text. I think you could have chosen fewer examples and really have analyzed them in more depth. You begin your article with uncertainty, and this somewhat shadows the rest of your writing. I think you should really know who the “Someone” is. I really enjoyed the idea of art consumption being a social qualifier and would have liked further investigation of this concept. I was surprised by the down turn of your final paragraph. All of the other paragraphs are humorous and light except for the last, which makes me not want to believe your ultimate impression of the show, was a sad one. Your writing style is quick witted and punchy. Your social and political views are subtly addressed.

Alex

Sally,
Your writing well conveys your excitement about Jean Lowe’s work. You gave many humorous examples of book cover imagery and text. I think you could have chosen fewer examples and really have analyzed them in more depth. You begin your article with uncertainty, and this somewhat shadows the rest of your writing. I think you should really know who the “Someone” is. I really enjoyed the idea of art consumption being a social qualifier and would have liked further investigation of this concept. I was surprised by the down turn of your final paragraph. All of the other paragraphs are humorous and light except for the last, which makes me not want to believe your ultimate impression of the show, was a sad one. Your writing style is quick witted and punchy. Your social and political views are subtly addressed.

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